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はじめに

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問題

Agree or Disagree; The Internet should be subject to censorship

エッセーを紹介します。太字部分がテンプレートになります。

注意:回答は書きやすい内容(理由)を書いているだけで、私の個人の意見とは全く関係がありません。

回答(賛成の立場)

Nowadays, you can search almost anything on the Internet. Some people insist that the Internet should not be subject to censorship because we should be guaranteed the freedom of expression. However, I strongly believe that the Internet needs to be censored for the following reasons.

Firstly, we can prevent crimes by censoring the Internet. For example, criminals who are considering to commit crimes would often exchange information through the Internet. If we can find such information in advance, we can prevent crimes from happening.

Secondly, restricting the Internet can keep children from seeing harmful information posted. To illustrate, children are not mature and are affected easily by the information they read through SNS. Therefore, we should censor the Internet to protect children.

Finally, we can eliminate fake news by censorship. Fake news harm people and our society. For instance, fake news come in subject again and again by Donald Trump, the president of the United States. It has power to make people believe in things that are far from the truth. Thus, we should exclude fake news to make our world more comfortable.

In conclusion, it should be allowed to censor the Internet. To summarize, my three reasons were as follows; censorship can prevent crimes, protect children, and eliminate fake news.

回答(反対の立場)

Nowadays, it is easy for people to express their opinions on the Internet. Some people insist that the Internet should be subject to censorship because it makes it possible to eliminate harmful information to be posted on the Internet. However, I do not believe that the Internet needs to be suppressed for the following reasons.

Firstly, people should be allowed to express their opinions freely on the Internet. For example, if censorship is conducted, many people would hesitate to post their ideas. I believe it is important to protect our rights to give our opinions without feeling uncomfortable.

Secondly, we should not allow governments to control us by censorship. To illustrate, the Chinese government have initiated censorship to monitor their citizens’ opinions regularly. This caused stress among them, as well as prevented them from knowing the latest news. Thus, censorship should be abolished for people’s better lives.

Finally, censorship may impede innovations. There are many website which provide people with information about latest technology. If these website are censored, people may not post their discoveries actively. As this would prevent innovations, censorship should be abolished for the progress of the human race.

In conclusion, we should repeal censorship on the Internet. To summarize, my three reasons were as follows; it is important for people to express their opinions without hesitation, we should not permit our governments to control our lifestyles, and we should not prevent innovations from happening.

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